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[Slash]

SHARK BITE
by Slash Plazma (me)

Murkey water, come and play
with the sight of a Death day
A monster will come if you stay
in the Murkey water were you play

Splish Splash...it is comming
Splish Splosh ...it is breathing
...are you dieing?...

See, it is getting dark
so say your last remark
the monster is swimming by
before look at the sky...

Splish Splash...it is comming
Splish Splosh ...it is breathing
...are you Screeming?...

Now, It has come to bite you and your thumb
blood gooshes every were see the fear and the scars! now you see the red water...were you used to ponder...

Splish Splash...it has came
Splish Splosh ...your not breathing
...are you dead...

A happy pome bt Slash

[tobiast88]

Ok I'll post. Criticism is welcome!

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Cry, crickets, in resounding heat
Slow, crushing weight
Sing, echo, as I bask and wait
Still pressure beats

Glass glares, reflections sharp and bare
Knives, solid light
Fan blades, indifferent, slice the air
Pale spirals white

Air solid, liquid, flows and sears
Tense, smouldering calm
Suns radiate in holding palms
Sweat drips like tears

Dull bodies lie as shards of light
Pierce willing flesh
June's sultry, incandescent bite
Calls, languid, rest


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A warm and rippling sun
A second lost, an hour won
The taut horizon's line
And after all... is all not fine?

Companionship and laughs
A teasing smile, a joking wrath
A friendly group combines
And after all... is all not fine?

An unimportant past
And futures gone; present at last
Our troubles left behind
And after all... is all not fine?


I have trouble titling my poems... Suggestions are welcome!

[Bookwyrm Poet]

I wrote this one because my english teacher wrote the words "Still Life" on the blackboard and it got me thinking and I ended up with this:

Still life
Life in a painting
A moment of time
Eternally trapped
Within a wooden frame

Pale blue and green
The sky and the earth
A gentle landscape
Of a lost world

A soft purple
Of clouds gone by
Offset by the golden
Glow of the setting sun

Mighty eagle among
The clouds, a creature
King of the skies
Master of the rivers

Gentle deer flee
Through mighty kings,
The lords of the woods
Ancient beyond all time

[Slash]

Darkness defing
the world is crying
and all you can say...
is what a wonderus day!

Lives are sighing
abd wastting this day....

The End

I know that was not the pest pome but...*sigh*
...it is a pome oh *HAAAA*

[mythbusterfan]

hmm...it's been too long since i've posted here... so...

Mountain Free

As i sit here way up high,
On this mountain in the sky,
I look on down at those below,
And i wonder if they even know,
Why i climbed this mountain,
this pinnacle, this dream,
do they understand,
the beauty of a mountain scene?

i've climbed this slope all my life,
kept climbing through times of pain,
Climbed through times of strife,
through happiness and fun,
From the rise of the morning light,
to the beauty of the setting sun.

now at the top i am finally free,
i can look around and finally see,
how i got to be where i am
How i came to be,
and how through all of this,
i've shaped myself into me...

[Shandurai]

ok. Constructive critisism time for those people who asked...

-Cress: you're poem was really good, I liked the way you said 'and her' because it sort of brings out the issue more. Also, when you said the way I cling, it sort of makes people feel for you because most know what that's like.

-La Folle: wow, that's beautiful. I agree, we're all, essentially, born to die. It's just a fact. Sort of like you could have said we're dust in the wind. It brings on a somber mood.

-Mousey: How exactly did you get that name? I think it's interresting because I once had friends exactly like yours and they nicknamed me mouse. I feel for you, Mousey, I really do. There's someone out there who feels the same as you do, you just have to look a little bit harder.

Good Job everyone!



Just Like Today

[Artemis Wolfang]

Kay, this one's kind of long. But it's YW themed!

Warning! W@W SPOILERS. HIGHLIGHT TO READ
Fall of the Gods

[Angel_Star]

Shandurai:
wow, you got published! You must be pretty awesome then. I would love to see the poem that got put into a book, that would be so cool!

I actually think that my poem is on here...somewhere. *looks around* It's here. I think that should take you right there...hopefully. I don't want to post it again and take up space when it's already up. I don't really have a title for this next one, and it's really rambling. I was just bored in class, hehe.

Winding roads
throughout my world,
confusing and beautiful
all the same.
Running up and down
lost and purposeless,
running, from what?
Only dreamt up nightmares,
ghosts from the past
easily brushed away
by the morning sun.
Direction comes with the dawn,
enlightenment with the sunrise.
Shadows can't last forever
though wish they may.
Instead the coming light
will keep them all at bay.

[mythbusterfan]

I don't know

[MagikMelody]

i like to write poems from the POV of other people, often young children full of innocence and who are confused as to why the world works the way it does. Here's one 1 wrote when i was a little upset....


THE WEAK ARE NEVER LOST

Who will help?
I am a child and guidance I need

Who will listen?
I am young and my path has curves

Who will comfort?
My naïve nature makes me perfect prey

Who will save me?
My small body cannot take much more

I am young and small
Weak and fragile
Hurt and damaged

Yet my youth has a nerver-ending light
My small size allows me to crawl through the smallest cracks
And with a little time
I CAN become strong
And live

[Mousey]

Alone
Alone.
Alone is what I am...
My friends never stay,
No never stay...

They aren't truely friends
If they just walk away
And ignore me...
They get older, change
And turn away...
Yes turn away from me...

This poem is from my POV describing exactly how I feel about my RL 'friends'. Not really friends if they don't even TALK to me. *goes off into a corner to read*

[Cress]

[La Folle]

[Shandurai]

that was really good. I'll give you some light constructive critisism, alright? Well, normally when poets use short sentences like yours, they choose their words very carefully. You melted my heart though, and I agree with your p.s.. Love is something that can be turned against you at any time, and shouldn't be mucked in. Good job, agfish! And Marelle, I loved your wording, you are very talented.

-Dai, Shandurai

[agfish92]

very very good.. i think it needs somethinng.. maby an internal rhime or a abab rhyme scheme


oh and 1 more thing.. i wrote this poem/song tell me how you like it


crying so loud,
crying so clear,
hearing you cry is the only thing i hear,

listing hard ,
i find the way,
the way through your heart,

the only way,
of living to me,
is seeing you smile ,
waching you love me,

but when push comes to shove,
you pull away,
pulling away from my heart and me,

thinking about what i did,
i see that it was wrong,

but now that its done ,
and now that its over,

we both see it though,
saying "i love you" ,
is all we needed to do,

but i did it again,
your pulling away,
the life slips from my palms,

i stair out and watch,
you wont stop,
running away again,

without you,
my life is over,
love is a waiste,

without you ,
my heart is broken,
till we met someday,



love is something you dont wanna talk to harshley... think of how they feal.. if you put them first and pull them from the bus comming at you then more than likely neather of you will get hurt.. hope that makes sence.. tell me how you like it