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  • #91
    when chat doesn't work
    it's really quite unfair
    because you can't talk

    with people who are
    there and alone but you want
    to be able to.
    Believe something... and somewhere, it's happened

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    • #92
      It makes me sad that
      I always miss the chats, as
      I 'member them well...

      I miss my good friends,
      and the fun times that we had.
      When will it return?

      Chatting with others
      living elsewhere on this blue
      planet. I miss that.

      What must we do for
      it to return? I wish that
      we had not lost it...

      Though, I do not think
      it would be the same without
      PM always there...

      Maybe it is better
      to remember it fondly.
      A thing of the past...

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      • #93
        I saw Speed Racer
        MdDS has relapsed
        Dizzy again. Crud.

        Crud crud crud crud crud.
        Comic-Con and Worldcon now
        Not looking likely.

        Oh, well. There's always
        Discworld Convention next year
        I cross my fingers

        I hold myself in
        Patience and remember how
        To laugh with my friends
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        • #94
          I am 40 now.
          I'd rather be 9 again.
          Life goes on, drat it.
          "...and that's how Snuggles the hamster learned that yes, things COULD always get worse."

          "You are the most insolent child I have ever had the misfortune to teach." "Thank you."

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          • #95
            Originally posted by Peter Murray:
            It's an assonance, as Eustace Scrubb claimed in Voyage of the Dawn Treader.
            Yet another person who has read The Chronicals of Narnia(I might've spelled it wrong) I am almost as big a fan of that as this.
            ---
            Originally posted by kli6:
            It doesn't have to be poetic. It doesn't have to be profound. It doesn't even necessarily have to make sense as a sentence. You just have to (like any wizard) love words. It's kind of like fitting puzzle pieces together, and you look at words a little differently when you have to pay attention to how many syllables there are.
            OH YAY!!! I don't have to make sense! So, I guess I'll give it a try.

            Wizards as we are,
            Protecting life over death,
            We slow entropy.

            That was my pathetic try at a haiku...

            [--edited to consolidate double-post. kli]

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            • #96
              Not pathetic 'tall
              Very good first try at haiku
              I'm thinking that is

              Playing with wordage
              Is the lifesblood for wizards.
              And writers as well!
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              • #97
                If wordage is life
                For writers and for wizards
                What are photographs?
                "...and that's how Snuggles the hamster learned that yes, things COULD always get worse."

                "You are the most insolent child I have ever had the misfortune to teach." "Thank you."

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                • #98
                  A way to show off
                  All the books around the place
                  In one simple glance:



                  Ok, well maybe
                  A Pierce's Quincunx remap
                  Is not so simple.
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                  • #99
                    eh why not;

                    heart unbeliveing
                    wizardy shalt not abide
                    always remember

                    eh its ok for like five minuets.

                    Kli, i did not have a head-ache but i do now. Im just staring at that and just getting my berrings. Amazzing, wonderfull, and soooooo confuesing.
                    (\__/) "Be amazing"
                    (+'.'+)
                    (")_(")

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                    • Sorry. I forget that
                      cubic panos are weird.
                      And little planets
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                      • This I swear: that I
                        will ever guard and protect,
                        for the sake of Life.

                        Sounds like a sentence... and doesn't really follow the more season-themed type haikus that are traditional. I wonder if a : is allowed?

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                        • I promise to protect all life in its forms
                          and to keep the Lone Power away
                          I will make sure the bees stay safe in their swarms
                          And keep all death at bay
                          Dai!

                          P.S. gone libraring

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                          • Lets see if I can really make a haiku work..seasons and all.

                            Throughout all seasons,
                            Entropy decreasing and
                            Our mission being fulfilled.

                            Argh, can't believe I wrote that... took me a long time too. It makes no sense. Let me try a few more.

                            Confusing haikus
                            Sanity has no place here
                            Wizards all typing

                            Now I forget what this is called, but I'm going to try one...

                            With all of us here
                            In the way of entropy
                            Zipping up the sweater of death
                            Always a step ahead
                            Repeating our cause
                            Dairine shall help
                            Repair life's problems
                            Yes, we took the oath.

                            Yes, I know that was a little lame but I couldn't think of anything that started with a Z.

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                            • Zs are hard to find
                              But acrostics are great fun
                              I like it a lot!
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                              • Words are powerful.
                                I speak, I heal, grow, protect.
                                For all, I serve Life.
                                -Tell me and I may remember; show me and I'll understand; involve me and I'll never forget. Thank you, PM. Your light lives on.

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