?poetry?

[brokencello]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo come back, my friends! I need you guys here. This is an awesome topic!!!!! COME BACK!

brokencello
the crinkled paper bag
"Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow
--Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso

[brokencello]

please. come. back. to. this. topic. and. why. am. I. writing. like. this. why. to. get. your. attention. of. course. so. just. pretend. I. have. it. and. come. back. to. this. wonderful. topic. because. it. will. make. bc. very. very. happy. if. you. do. so. thank. you. for. coming. back. here.

brokencello
the crinkled paper bag
"Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

[EWizard11]

Hi, bc! I don't have any really good (okay, okay, they all suck ) poems going right about now, but I'll try for your sake to bring this topic back. COME TO THE POETRY TOPIC! THOSE OF YOU WHO CAN WRITE POETRY! WHICH IS NOT ME!

*Ella*

"'Do we start kicking now?'
'No, Spongebob, that's a chorus line.'"
-Spongebob Squarepants

[Birdhead]

Uhm- OK, bc. I don't think I have anything new, though, because I've been slack and also on holiday and my daily writing quota's been going on my journal. But OK. *pokes around*

OK, hee, this is funny enough.

The English exam
Still has forty minutes left to go.DoAhahahaha, Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha!
Still the Typo Queen

[papercrane]

lol. Love it, Tui. Seriously...I have a compelling urge to put it on a sweatshirt or my bedroom wall or an exam paper or something right now. It needs to go places. Wish I wrote good stuff like that...anyways, to recap: I adore it.

The important thing about adventures, thought Mr Bunnsy, was that they shouldn't be so long as to make you miss mealtimes.
-- (Terry Pratchett, The Amazing Maurice and his Educated Rodents)

[Birdhead]

Hey, thanks! mm, I do quietly like it, actually. Thanks.
*feels very complimented* *has a swollen head*

"We are philosophical geniuses [sic] who will one day rule the world!"
--Agent M
Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha!
Still the Typo Queen

[rae]

please keep in mind that about half of my poems are actually meant to be songs

Did you really think
I would forgive you just like that
I once loved you
and you said that you loved me
but you see,
don't Ignore me

Someday I might forgive you
But I'll never forget
how I felt the day I saw
that you Ignored me

You scramble to get back
in my good graces
you set me up
to get me to come to your defence
I don't need to give my heart
to one who never changed

Someday I might forgive you
But I'll never forget
how I felt the day I saw
that you Ignored me

I helped you find someone else
one of my best friends
but you threw her aside
and came back after me

how could I have
mistaken
you to be changed
I thought that you had grown up
I guess some things never change

Someday I might forgive you
But I'll never forget
how I felt the day I saw
that you Ignored me

[rae]

what do you think???

[Birdhead]

I think it would make a good song. I don't know about it as a poem... I would prefer to hear it set to music, I think it would do really nicely.

"We are philosophical geniuses [sic] who will one day rule the world!"
--Agent M
Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha!
Still the Typo Queen

[rae]

It is a song... written by me
I'd mail you a tape, but you live in New Zealand, and that would be really expensive

[Zgirl]

That's really good!!!!!!

U R an awesome song writer! Do you sing or play an instrument or something? I am jealous...

Have an issue get a tissue!!--Steph C.
Kisses taste like chicken-- Absoulutely Normal Chaos...sharon creech

[brokencello]

Mine are rather songs too. But....
"Anymore"
It's rather funny
I laugh outside
But in my heart
I'm cold as iron
You came one day
Took me as your girl
The prettiest belle
Was I that day
When I aged
I lost my beauty
But I still loved you
All the same
And you ran off
With some brand new belle
Prettier than me
Better too
You said that you
Would love me forever
But that's a lie
I wonder how
Your shining belle
Will feel when she ages
And you don't love her
You'll go off
With some new belle
And live on life
Just the same
But you broke our hearts
'Cuz we loved you
But you were a lie to us
So thanks for the trip
Down Memory Lane
But I don't need you
I don't want you
I don't love you
Anymore

brokencello
the crinkled paper bag
"Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

[papercrane]

I was up late a while ago, and wrote this. Feel free to flame.
I haven't put this here already, have I?

Stepsister

[Birdhead]

Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha!
Still the Typo Queen

[brokencello]

Amber, that is so COOL! I wrote something like that once, but I forget.
Maybe I'll write it later. But that was so good. I wish I could write like that!

brokencello
the crinkled paper bag
"Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"