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  • #76
    I've had angry comments that made angry poetry. And I hate it when if you say someone is copying you, they say, for instance, "No I'm not. I'm not ugly." And so. THEN he was sorry. My eyes turned yellow-green, like when I'm mad, and he's like, "OK...Get away!"

    brokencello
    the crinkled paper bag
    "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
    --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
    brokencello
    the crinkled paper bag
    "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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    • #77
      Well. I'm enraged.
      Enraged
      I cannot believe
      What a fool I am
      Enraged
      I cannot believe
      That I would do it

      I thought it was over
      I thought it was done
      But you had to come and say it
      And when you said it
      It suddenly was fresh anew

      I thought we wouldn't speak again
      I thought there would be nothing but silence between us
      But you had to look at me like that
      And when you looked at me
      I opened my mouth and the sound came out

      I thought you would leave forever
      I thought you wouldn't be back
      But you had to come round the corner today
      And when you came round that corner
      I ran to you
      Into your arms

      Enraged
      I'm such a fool
      I need to leave
      Disgraced
      I'm so foolish
      Such a fool

      brokencello
      the crinkled paper bag
      "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
      --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
      brokencello
      the crinkled paper bag
      "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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      • #78
        ah, i haven't been in here for a while. bc i really like that! i think it's great! oh shista, i have to go! be back later guys

        Call me Q :-)

        you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better friends are always near.

        Call me Q :-)

        you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better fr

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        • #79
          It's later. WHERE ARE YOU? I'm just kidding. Ah, raiiny days. RAINY days, I should say. I am angry again. "Oh, well, you're so small." Call me small, and you'll wish you were a lot bigger. *eno snickers*

          brokencello
          the crinkled paper bag
          "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
          --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
          brokencello
          the crinkled paper bag
          "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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          • #80
            i'm back, oh if you're angry again feel free to vent. i do it all the time bc!

            Call me Q :-)

            you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better friends are always near.

            Call me Q :-)

            you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better fr

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            • #81
              That little bobble made my day. But here's what I was about to write:
              I know you see me shiver here
              I know you see me cry
              But you think that I've admitted defeat
              Which is so far from the truth

              You know I see you stand above
              You know I see you laugh
              But you think that you rule everything
              Which is a great almighty lie

              And when the people see just what you've done
              They'll revolt and tear your reign
              It could be months or even years
              But I assure you it will come

              But when it comes you'll realize
              How wrong you were to torment me
              So smile now and laugh at my tears
              For when I strike you back you'll know
              I did not admit defeat

              brokencello
              the crinkled paper bag
              "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
              --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
              brokencello
              the crinkled paper bag
              "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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              • #82
                great write bc! i know exactly what your saying...the raw feelings in this make it powerful. it's awesome!

                Call me Q :-)

                you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better friends are always near.

                Call me Q :-)

                you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better fr

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                • #83
                  Thanks. I'm really proud of myself for this one--cuz I did it!

                  It's been three years since I've looked beyond the wall
                  I hoisted up and glanced outside
                  I expected to face monsters, bloodshed and fear
                  But instead I found an empty hill

                  I thought the death would always linger
                  I thought that nothing could take it away
                  But now I see that with my bravery
                  I lifted the shadows and dropped in sun

                  I know now that you died for a reason
                  I know now that I must move on
                  I know now just how I can do it
                  And I will this very day

                  brokencello
                  the crinkled paper bag
                  "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
                  --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
                  brokencello
                  the crinkled paper bag
                  "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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                  • #84
                    BC, that's really brave. Congratulations. *hugs*

                    "We are philosophical geniuses [sic] who will one day rule the world!"
                    --Agent M
                    Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha, Ahahahaha!
                    Go ahead! Panic! Do it now and avoid the June rush! Fear death by water!

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                    • #85
                      Really good, BC!

                      IF WE HAVE TO GIVE THIS BASTARDS OUR LIVES, WE GIVE THEM HELL BEFORE WE DO!!!
                      Comradely, Diego

                      Blow wind, come wrath; at least I will die with the harness off my back.
                      ------------------------------------------------------------
                      "I know you've come to kill me. Shoot, coward, you will only kill a man." - Che

                      "Be a real

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                      • #86
                        Thanks. But really. I didn't think I could do it. I was afraid to let it go because I thought something worse would happen. But with it gone---I feel FREE! It's like death happens and I must move on...

                        brokencello
                        the crinkled paper bag
                        "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
                        --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
                        brokencello
                        the crinkled paper bag
                        "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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                        • #87
                          *gives bc big hug* yes, you are completely right! death is so depressing andcan really bring you down...it's awesome that you are moving on, that takes a lot of courage and strength. POWER TO THE BC!

                          Call me Q :-)

                          you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better friends are always near.

                          Call me Q :-)

                          you never know who your real friends are until the hard times come. When it isn't all happy laughs and fun. sometimes your old friends will rough it & stay. but usuall they tend to fade away. If they fade, do not fear, bcuz better fr

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                          • #88
                            How about just BC, Q. I am not an it.
                            This scar on my hand burns
                            This is the sign of stupidity
                            I see it as I move
                            I feel the pain in my heart
                            Of why I didn't tell him
                            Just the way I felt
                            He smiles at me in my mind
                            But now it's too late
                            This scar screams to him
                            Does he have a scar for me?
                            But both too shy
                            To say how we felt
                            Maybe another month
                            Another year
                            Another life
                            We'll kiss again

                            brokencello
                            the crinkled paper bag
                            "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
                            --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
                            brokencello
                            the crinkled paper bag
                            "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

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                            • #89
                              Wow, bc, you're really good! My sister writes poetry, and I've been known to whip up a couple verses or two, but nothing like what you write. Keep going!

                              If ignorance is bliss, why aren't more people happy?

                              Curiosity mauled the cat and left it on the side of the road.

                              School is hell with flourescent lighting.
                              I will rejoice in the moonlight;
                              I will dance in the rivers of my tears;
                              For I am joyously, wonderfully alive!

                              Make your own laws or be a slave to another man's. -William Blake

                              School is hell with flourescent lighting.

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                              • #90
                                Um, ok. Thanks, I guess. I don't really think they're that good...cuz they might only make sense to me...but I like writing them. Thanks, thanks a lot. (NO i am not being sarcastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

                                brokencello
                                the crinkled paper bag
                                "Life isn't like the movies, Toto."
                                --Alfredo, Cinema Paradiso
                                brokencello
                                the crinkled paper bag
                                "Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate." "But why is the rum gone?" --both from Captain Jack Sparrow, "Pirates"

                                Comment

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