Do that in such a way that Darryl buys into the rewrite, and you take the risk of excising something that maked the difference between hiim passing his Ordeal, and him never coming out of it.
I'm fairly certain that the word that should have been used is makes. Was this just a typo in the transcription, or a minor error in the excerpt itself?
Logic is a poor servant, but an excellent master.
-- The Book of Forgotten Things
I'm fairly certain that the word that should have been used is makes. Was this just a typo in the transcription, or a minor error in the excerpt itself?
Logic is a poor servant, but an excellent master.
-- The Book of Forgotten Things
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