Duncan. I didn't say anything about your talent. It would be kind of stupid of me to do so, without having read any of your poetry, wouldn't it? She didn't need Shakespeare, either, when she was writing The Door Into Fire.
As to why I was so harsh, what you were proposing to do was to ask DD to use some of your writing in her own. How would you feel if I tried to insert or change a line in your poem above? It's yours. I don't have that right.
The same applies to DD's books. She gets to choose what she wants to put in them. And she's the only one who does. You can offer her your poetry, but she's under no obligation, whether you're a fan or not, whether it was inspired by her works or not, to use it.
In your shoes, I wouldn't send a poem asking her to put it in her books. I'd send a poem, and just say how much her books meant to you, and hope that she enjoys the poem, and leave the rest of the choosing up to her.
Your poem's good. Off-topic (which is why I pointed you to the thread for poetry. :-), but good. And good for you for taking my comment and turning it into an "I'll show her!" That's what writers do with criticsm. It's all raw material.
And if you want to edit a post for a typo, you can always do so by clicking on the icon with of the pencil eraser over a folder. Welcome to the board!
As to why I was so harsh, what you were proposing to do was to ask DD to use some of your writing in her own. How would you feel if I tried to insert or change a line in your poem above? It's yours. I don't have that right.
The same applies to DD's books. She gets to choose what she wants to put in them. And she's the only one who does. You can offer her your poetry, but she's under no obligation, whether you're a fan or not, whether it was inspired by her works or not, to use it.
In your shoes, I wouldn't send a poem asking her to put it in her books. I'd send a poem, and just say how much her books meant to you, and hope that she enjoys the poem, and leave the rest of the choosing up to her.
Your poem's good. Off-topic (which is why I pointed you to the thread for poetry. :-), but good. And good for you for taking my comment and turning it into an "I'll show her!" That's what writers do with criticsm. It's all raw material.
And if you want to edit a post for a typo, you can always do so by clicking on the icon with of the pencil eraser over a folder. Welcome to the board!

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